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I’m not sure I believe the summary
of the experiment

of the women
and the piles of worn shirts

The collared and the torn
The frayed elbow

The scuffed snaps
flaking white paint

Laundry is pretty concrete
You’re washing & folding

a shared idea once
or twice a week for years

Gently putting each other
into neat little drawers

You do mine
& I do yours

3 thoughts on “4

  1. This:
    Laundry is pretty concrete
    You’re washing & folding

    a shared idea once
    or twice a week

    Once or twice a week YES! In Tokyo laundry is every other day, which is seriously a drag-LOL. Much of Japan still operates on the concept of ‘housewife’ regardless how little that makes sense economically.

  2. Love this!

  3. I don’t know the experiment, but I love the alternative this poem offers, especially the vaguely sexy housework of

    You do mine
    & I do yours

    😉

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